A well-written cover letter is an essential part of your career
toolkit. A cover letter makes a clear, singular argument: why
an employer should hire you. This argument is captured in
the story you share about how you can add value for that
employer. Use the details and strategies in this guide to help
you communicate your story with impact and influence!
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A How-to Guide for
Undergraduate Students
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Whats Your Value Proposition?
A value proposition refers to the benefits a company promises to deliver to
customers. Your value proposition is a statement of the knowledge, skills,
experience, passion, values, and commitment you’ll bring to your target
opportunity. In short, it’s a clear statement of what you have to offer.
Your Value Proposition
and the Cover Letter
What’s the connection between a value
proposition and a cover letter? Your
resume provides a comprehensive overview
of your skills and experiences. Readers
can only assume why these experiences
are highlights for you and what these
experiences reveal about your character
and personality. Use your cover letter to
help readers more fully understand how
you have added value in the past and
how you intend to do so in the future.
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When we think of cover letters, we often
emphasize form (e.g., margins, font size and styles,
line spacing), not function. A cover letter needs to
look the part, but in our eagerness to follow the
correct form, we forget about function. We forget
that the argument – the “pitch”– is the primary
function. Our cover letters can become simply
summaries of our resumes. The two – form
and function – must join together to create a
compelling argument for our candidacy.
Communicating Your Value
To help you communicate your value in your cover letter story, use this tool to help you identify the
connection between your experiences and your values. Allow yourself to brag a bit. Why are you so
proud of a particular experience? What do you think this pride reflects about you?
Maxfield Jones
(413) 123-4567 | Linkedin.com/in/Maxfield-Jones | [email protected]
EDUCATION
University of Massachusetts Amherst
Amherst, MA
Isenberg School of Management
Bachelor of Business Administration in Accounting Candidate, May 20XX
Cumulative GPA 3.73; Dean’s List; Commonwealth Honors College
Anticipated 150 Hour Completion: Will complete 150 hours for CPA compliancy December 20XX
Bunker Hill Community College
Boston, MA
Associate of Science in Business Administration May 20XX
GPA: 3.75
EXPERIENCE
State Street Corporation
Hadley, MA
Global Operations Processing Analyst Fall 20XX - Present
Process international, federal, and domestic securities transactions (equities, fixed incomes) with 99.6% accuracy
Identify and research problem transactions (e.g., data quality, settlement details, etc.)
Resolve any such conflict via communication with fund managers, team members, and external group s
University of Massachusetts Amherst Amherst, MA
Resident Assistant
Fall 20XX - Present
Develop safe community for residents; earned highest "five-star" safety environment rating for dorm
Enhance residential community by coordinating at least ten social and educational events each semester
Enforce code of student conduct and university policy consistently and objectively
Massachusetts Small Business Development Center (MSBDC)
Springfield, MA
Small Business Consultant Intern June - August 20XX
Advised small furniture business owner on website strategy; increased site traffic by 27% in two months
Led two interns in orientation meetings with small business owners; increased participants' awareness of services
Developed cash flow strategies and determined loan eligibility while working with clients one-on-on e
Citizens Bank
Marlboro, MA
Document Handling Analyst June - August 20XX
Sorted and checked outgoing mail with 99% accuracy rate
Acquired correct customer information to process mail accurately
Batched and shipped loans to appropriate servicer, following established protocol
ACTIVITIES
Beta Alpha Psi
Fall 20XX - Present
Interact with students, faculty, and professionals to foster growth, service, and ethical conduct ideals
Tutor accounting students five hours per week in various courses
Accounting Association
Spring 20XX - Present
Attend numerous speaker forums, programming, and social events to increase knowledge of issues, trend s,
and opportunities within the Accounting realm
Isenberg Undergraduate Leadership Council (ULEAD) Spring 20XX
Developed coffee business, Morning Grind, for Isenberg School community with a team of fellow me mbers
Solicited over $2,500 through targeted fundraising efforts
SKILLS
Computer: Microsoft Excel, Word, PowerPoint, Access; Minitab; HTML; CSS; Fluent in JavaScript
Language: Fluent in Portuguese & Spanish; Conversational in German
Your Isenberg resume
captures experiences that
required you to use a range
of skills to accomplish tasks.
Measureable results help
show that these experiences
were successful.
Your cover letter tells
a story that uses these
details to share why
you're proud of these
experiences and what
they reveal about you.
Identifying Your Value
Experience
Measurables
Skills
Braggables
Values
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September 12, 2021
Hiring Manager
Staples, Inc.
500 Staples Drive
Framingham, MA 01702
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to apply for the Marketing Internship posted on Handshake. I am a junior marketing major in
the Isenberg School of Management at UMass Amherst, where I am also a student in the Honors College.
My recent marketing internship has prepared me to create and publish social media content and work with
content and HR teams, tasks expected of Staples interns. This internship, as well as my leadership roles at
UMass, have prepared me well to succeed in this Staples Marketing Internship.
Last summer, I worked as a marketing intern for OnePIN, Inc., a global provider of mobile services.
Throughout my internship, I utilized iMovie and FinalCutPro to produce 26 product advertisement videos
featured on the company website; I created these videos in English and Turkish to cater to OnePIN’s
global market. Additionally, I completed industry research for senior managers and outlined a social
media plan designed to boost online engagement. Because of my successful performance, I became a
central voice in decision making regarding advertisements and product development. This internship
taught me how to engage confidently with company executives in all departments, and I am prepared to
engage equally well with senior leaders at Staples on similar type of assignments.
As I did in my internship, I have demonstrated strong leadership as a UMass student. In addition to
working two jobs on campus, I presently serve as Risk Manager for the Sigma Sigma Sigma sorority. In
this role, I ensure that all Tri Sigma social media reflects our values and showcases our achievements. I
have become especially skillful at vetting social media posts for content and examining our social media
presence objectively, so our sorority makes a positive, public impression. Values count, and you can
depend on me to help promote Staples’ core values with a positive online presence.
My internship experience and demonstrated leadership would make me an asset to the Staples team. I am
especially eager to intern for a company that values sustainability and the lives of its employees. I look
forward to discussing this position further at your convenience. Please contact me at [email protected]
or at 413-123-4567 with any questions in the meantime. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Michelle Jones
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Aligning Your Story with Job Posts
Identifying the Reader’s Needs
A job post will often include a wide range
of desired qualifications. Think of skills and
competencies as one category of qualifications,
and related experiences as another category.
A third category is values and attributes. Select
those qualifications that speak to you and
group them separately. Begin to explore what
experiences from your story you’ll use to make
your pitch in your cover letter.
To determine an employer’s needs, you must carefully read and analyze job posts.
This process requires you to identify your reader’s needs and align the story you
will develop with those needs. Your story will include experiences that demonstrate
your skills, achievements, and values.
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Skills &
Competencies
Related
Experiences
Values &
Attributes
market
research
social media
planning
project
management
B2B marketing
skills
work in diverse
environments
leadership roles
or
team leads
team-oriented
visionary
innovative
open-minded
initiative
Experience
Measurables
Skills
Braggables
Values
Summer marketing
internship with
ABC, Inc. (mobile
service provider)
Video production Produced 26 product
advertisement videos
presently featured on
company website
I was a central voice
in decision making with
respect to advertisement
production and placement
Taking on new
responsibilities that
challenge me to
learn beyond my
current expertise
Social media
planning
Industry research
Aligning Your Story and the Reader’s Needs
To determine how to tailor your cover letter for a specific job post, identify experiences from your own
story that match qualifications of interest to your reader. You won’t be able to include all your experiences
in your cover letter. The goal is to identify experiences that most closely align with your reader’s needs.
ASK THE ISENBERG EXPERTS!
QUESTION: Must I write a completely different letter for each job post?
ANSWER: No. Many cover letters you send could have similar—if not identical—sentences or sections at
times. However, do not send out generic cover letters. Readers can easily pick these letters out, and you greatly
lower your chances for follow-up. Instead, tailor your letter to your specific reader and that reader’s needs.
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Align Your Story with Job Posts
Cover Letter as a Writing Sample
Writing with Flow and Coherence
Tone and Word Choice
Proofreading
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Your Cover Letter as a Writing Sample
”Excellent writing skills.” Many job candidates include this phrase on their
resumes. How can a recruiter determine if a job candidate possesses these skills?
The cover letter provides proof, and employers will use it to determine if candidates
have the writing skills they are looking for.
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Cover letter writers must make a wide range
of choices: from arrangement strategies and
speaking points to word choice and visual
layout. Before you draft your cover letter, take
a moment to stop and consider the choices
you’ll make as a writer. Make them strategic.
Leave nothing to chance.
Audience, Purpose, and Use
Pay attention to these key drivers as you
prepare your cover letters:
Audience: A cover letter should
be written with a specific reader
in mind. A job post includes a
specific set of reader needs, and
your job is to make a pitch that
responds to those needs.
Purpose: If your cover letter
succeeds, you’ll be contacted
for an interview. A strategic,
well-written argument increases
your chances that you’ll get the
response you want.
Use: Your reader will use your
letter to assess your writing
skills and gain a sense of your
personality. Your reader will also
learn more about your story, as
captured in the experiences and
values you share.
Impact and Influence
A cover letter is not a formality; busy
professionals wouldn’t waste their time asking
for them were that the case. A cover letter
does something a resume can’t: it tells a
story with impact and influence. Your resume
describes your skills and experiences, but your
cover letter shares with readers why those
experiences matter and what they reveal about
you. Set yourself apart from the competition
by conveying your professional personality.
You want to become knowable—before you
even meet. If your story is compelling, readers
will be eager to arrange for the next important
step: the interview.
Align Your Story with Job Posts
Cover Letter as a Writing Sample
Writing with Flow and Coherence
Tone and Word Choice
Proofreading
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Writing with Flow and Coherence
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You’ve made your argument. Now you want your cover letter to read smoothly and
clearly. Use these guidelines to improve your letter’s readability.
Remember, you’re making a pitch for yourself
as a job candidate. Readers want well-qualified
candidates, which includes an ability to write
well. Your cover letter is direct evidence of your
writing style.
Paragraph Unity
Use claims as topic sentences in your body
paragraphs. A claim is a completed, persuasive
statement that establishes a clear focus for a
paragraph. Readers should quickly understand
the direction of your paragraph, and a claim
previews the supporting evidence you’ll use
to prove your claim. You achieve paragraph
unity when all sentences in a paragraph
support the singular claim you captured in
your topic sentence.
PRO TIP
Well-written paragraphs make your cover letters more accessible. Readers appreciate
this high skim value. Think shorter, focused paragraphs to accommodate your readers.
See the Sample Cover Letters for examples of strong paragraph unity.
ASK THE ISENBERG EXPERTS!
QUESTION: I always thought that
paragraphs must be 4-6 sentences long.
Is that true for cover letters?
ANSWER: You may remember those
types of guidelines from other writing
courses, and they can be useful. Readers
are unlikely to read lengthy paragraphs.
However, be sure that your paragraphs
have strong unity. Use strong, consistent
claims for topic sentences and support
only those claims to make your cover
letter’s body paragraphs shine.
Weak Claim Strong Claim
Last summer, I completed an
internship with Motorola.
My internship with Motorola gave
me invaluable experience in
B2B marketing research.
I have many strengths that qualify
me for this position.
Because of my numerous leadership
roles on campus, I have developed
strong presentation skills that would
help me succeed in this customer
service position.
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Writing with Flow and Coherence
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Proofreading
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PRO TIP
Use strong action verbs to express your ideas in cover letters. Verbs add life to your writing.
See the Sample Cover Letters for examples of paragraphs with flow and pace.
You are the hero of your cover letter
story. It makes sense that you’ll begin
many sentences with “I.” Be careful,
however. You can easily slip into an
“I-initial” writing style in cover letters.
As a result, your writing can become
quite choppy. The solution? Use transitions
to help minimize that choppiness.
Transitions
Use transitions to connect your ideas within
your cover letter paragraphs. Transitions
highlight relationships from sentence to
sentence as you share your story with
your reader. Readers who can follow these
relationships clearly find writing more
accessible and easier to follow. Without
these transitions, your writing can become
choppy. Use transitions to generate “flow.”
Avoid vague pronouns (e.g., this, that,
these, those) as you transition from one
sentence to the next in your paragraphs.
Make your relationships as clear as possible
for your readers.
Vague Pronouns Stronger Transitions
I completed industry research for
senior managers and outlined a social
media plan designed to boost online
engagement. Because of this, I became a
central voice in decision making regarding
advertisements and product development.
I completed industry research for
senior managers and outlined a social
media plan designed to boost online
engagement. Because of my successful
performance, I became a central voice in
decision making regarding advertisements
and product development.
Thanks to this internship, I gained a
much firmer grasp of emerging consumer
trends with respect to food service.
This will allow me to help Unilever target
new markets and drive growth.
Thanks to this internship, I gained a
much firmer grasp of emerging consumer
trends with respect to food service. This
know-how will allow me to help Unilever
target new markets and drive growth.
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Tone & Word Choice
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“You Attitude” &
Reader Benefits
A strong cover letter tells a compelling story,
and a reader-based tone transforms that story
into a compelling argument. When you write
with “you attitude,” you write with the reader
in mind. You make sure to share with readers
not simply what you can offer or what you have
accomplished, but how your reader benefits.
A sentence written with “you attitude” helps
your reader answer a pivotal question in cover
letters: “What’s in it for me?” Sentences with
“you attitude” work especially well to finish
body paragraphs, as the writers of these
Sample Cover Letters demonstrate.
Diction
Proper word choice improves the tone in cover
letters. Use plain, direct language to express your
ideas instead of jargon and buzzwords. Especially
avoid cliches; these tired phrases reflect tired
thinking and weaken your impression. Are you
a “team player?” Capture the idea plainly: you
“collaborate well.” Do you “think outside the
box?” Go with “think creatively.” Say what you
mean. Avoid the cliches.
Personalize sentences in your cover letter
to create a more persuasive tone. Instead
of writing “I admire your company’s
commitment to social responsibility,”
consider “I admire Microsoft’s commitment
to social responsibility.” Be careful, however.
When you prepare your cover letter for a
new reader, you must revise personalized
sentences. If you forget, you make a poor
impression and risk embarrassment.
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Align Your Story with Job Posts
Cover Letter as a Writing Sample
Writing with Flow and Coherence
Tone and Word Choice
Proofreading
You’re confident that your argument will influence readers, but does your word
choice help you make the strongest pitch possible to readers? Use these guidelines
to keep your argument reader-centered.
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Proofreading
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You have written a persuasive, compelling story to share with your readers. Before
you make your pitch, make sure to proofread your cover letters carefully. A cover
letter free of surface errors shows professionalism and increases your chances of
getting the follow-up you want.
PRO TIP
Even if words are spelled correctly in your cover letter, you still may be using the incorrect
version of a word. See “Proofreading 101: Commonly Misused Words” to review frequent
spelling errors that you want to avoid.
Spell-check and autocorrect tools are highly useful proofreading
tools—to an extent. These tools can identify most surface errors in
your cover letter, but missing or incorrect words may remain. Use
these tools to help you proofread your cover letter. However, you
should always read your cover letter yourself before you send.
Typos, Errors, & Inconsistencies
Your cover letter must be error-free. An error-free
cover letter sends readers a powerful, positive
preview of the writing you’ll produce in the
workplace. Readers want to focus on your story,
not on distracting typos, errors, and inconsistencies.
If these distractions pile up, readers may assume
you’re careless, rushed, or simply unable to
produce error-free writing. As a result, readers
might conclude that your messages to future
clients and customers will represent their
organizations poorly. Remember, your cover letter
is a writing sample. Make sure your writing reflects
your best professional self. Proofread carefully to
make an optimal impression.
Punctuation
Item Comment
Hyphens Joins two or more words to form
compound adjectives (e.g., full-time
position, short-term goals).
En dashes Signals a partnership or pairing
(e.g., the Patriots–Eagles game) or
expresses a range of information
(e.g., 2–3 weeks).
Em dashes Sets apart phrases for emphasis
(e.g., Directly buying such
properties—rather than investing
in shares—makes us unique.).
Proper nouns Capitalize names of titles
(e.g., President Smith), organizations
(e.g., Aetna, Marketing Club), and
geographic regions (e.g., Northeast
territory). Do not capitalize majors
(e.g., sports management major).
Apostrophes Indicates possession in singular
(e.g., company’s agreement) or
plural (e.g., companies’ agreement)
case. Avoid in plural constructions
of numbers (e.g., 2010s) and
abbreviations (e.g., MBAs).
Use of
numbers
Avoid expressing numbers as
digits in sentence-initial position
(e.g., Twelve employees spoke at
length.). Spell out all numbers
less than 10.
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Proofreading
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You also want to capture this information
briefly. Limit your opening paragraph
to a few sentences, as modeled in these
Sample Cover Letters.
Situation and Purpose
Quickly let your reader know how you discovered
the job post or position. Be as specific as possible.
If you found the post on a Chase Career Center
resource (e.g., Handshake), let the reader know.
If you spoke with a company representative at
a career fair to learn more about the position,
include that detail. Your reader wants a clear
sense of the situation up front in your cover letter.
In larger companies, job posts frequently include
requisition IDs in job posts; list that information
for your reader’s benefit.
Your reader also wants to know about you: your
major, your anticipated year of graduation, and
your availability for work. Finally, share with your
reader why you are interested in the position.
Forecasting
To finish your opening paragraph, include a
forecasting sentence that previews the pitch
you’ll make in your cover letter. What are your
major qualifications for the position: your prior
work experience? specific skill sets? These
qualifications will be different for each writer.
A forecasting sentence should give your reader
a sneak preview of your argument to follow.
The opening paragraph of your cover letter is critical. You immediately want to
let your reader know who you are, how you found out about the position, and why
you’re interested in the position.
ASK THE ISENBERG EXPERTS!
QUESTION: The opening paragraph of a cover letter is like an essay
introduction, right?
ANSWER: No. True, the opening paragraph of your cover letter introduces
you as a job candidate. However, the opening paragraph should be briefer
than other portions of your cover letter. Unlike an essay introduction,
your cover letter introduction follows a different set of rules or “moves”:
think situation, purpose, and forecasting.
PRO TIP
See Sample Cover Letters for examples of how
to properly introduce yourself as an Isenberg
student in the opening paragraph of your
cover letter. Never assume that readers know
that you’re a UMass student when you write
“Isenberg” or “ISOM.”
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Setting the Stage
Making the Sell
Inspiring a Reponse
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Making the Sell: e Body Paragraphs
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Think of your argument as a story. To create a
story with impact and influence, use strategies in
this section to organize and present your ideas:
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“Sell-Sell” Strategy
2
“Hook-Homework” Strategy
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“S.T.A.R” Strategy
“Sell-Sell” Strategy
A “sell-sell” cover letter requires you to
select two major qualifications and write a
paragraph for each. Examples of qualifications
may include an experience (e.g., internship),
a skill (e.g., social media planning), or a set of
related experiences (e.g., campus leadership
roles). Make sure that each body paragraph has
a singular focus.
The qualifications you select for each of your
“sell-sell” body paragraphs should reflect
your critical analysis of the job post. You
may use the same qualifications across many
cover letters you write, but not always. Use
the Identifying Your Value chart to capture
highlights from your resume that you might
include as qualifications in a “sell-sell” cover
letter. This chart can also help you understand
why you select the qualifications that you do.
“Hook-Homework” Strategy
A “hook-homework” cover letter is a little less
conventional. However, you can still make a
powerful pitch with this strategy. As with a
“sell-sell” cover letter, this strategy consists of
two paragraphs:
In your “hook” paragraph, you combine all
of your major qualifications into a single
paragraph. The challenge? You won’t be able
to include that much detail. Avoid turning this
paragraph into a lengthy list of reasons why
you’re a solid fit for the job.
In your “homework” paragraph, you prove
that you understand the company, the
requirements for the job, and your fit for the
position. A successful “homework” paragraph
requires you to research the company
carefully. Avoid general praise for the
company. Show that you clearly understand
the company’s values and culture, and why
you’re attracted to the company.
The body of your cover letter contains your “pitch,” a chance to show how
your skills, experiences, and interests make you a strong candidate for a position.
You will need to identify your major qualifications and convince your reader to
take that next step: arrange for an interview.
Do Your Research
Review a company’s website, press releases,
mission and vision statements, employee
profiles, financial performance—really,
any information you can obtain. Take
careful notes so you can add details to
your “homework” paragraph.
PRO TIP
A cover letter that shows alignment between a writer’s and reader’s values
makes for a strong story. See this Sample Cover Letter for an example of a
“hook-homework” cover letter.
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“S.T.A.R.” Strategy
Do you have a particular “episode” from your
life—a shining moment from an internship, say,
or a special academic achievement–that stands
out for you? Does this episode reveal something
about who you are that would persuade
your reader? Consider a S.T.A.R. paragraph
as a creative substitute for a paragraph in a
“sell-sell” cover letter. You could also substitute
a S.T.A.R. paragraph for the “hook” in a
“hook-homework” cover letter. See this
Sample Cover Letter as an example.
S.T.A.R. paragraphs follow a specific structure:
Establish the Situation, which includes your
role and the background for your example;
Describe the Task or problem you needed to
address in this situation;
Explain the Action you took to manage the
task or problem successfully;
Discuss the Result of your action and how
that action produced value for others.
Each S.T.A.R. element should be captured in no
more than one sentence. You can even combine
a few S.T.A.R. elements in a single sentence.
Remember, your S.T.A.R. is a one paragraph
substitute for either a “sell” or “hook”
paragraph in a cover letter. Your cover letter
strategy could fit any of these categories:
The “S.T.A.R.” strategy can even be used to
prove how you tackled a problem or challenge
successfully outside of work or school.
This approach is less conventional; think
carefully about why you might choose this
type of episode to build your argument. If
the episode reveals your resiliency, you might
consider this approach.
“Sell-Sell”
“Hook-Homework”
ASK THE
ISENBERG EXPERTS!
QUESTION: May I write more than
two body paragraphs in the body of my
cover letter?
ANSWER: We recommend two body
paragraphs, so your letter fills roughly
3/4 of the page. Think of these paragraphs
as a “highlights reel:” you can’t—and
shouldn’t—write about everything on your
resume. Under no circumstances should
your cover letter exceed one page.
“Sell-S.T.A.R.” “S.T.A.R.-Homework”
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Inspiring a Response: e Close
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The close of your cover letter will sound very similar for each letter you write. Keep
it brief: a few sentences will get the job done.
Make sure that your close is a separate
paragraph. Doing so helps isolate key
information for readers who wish to contact
you to arrange an interview. The best way
to inspire a response? Express a final thought
of goodwill and make future action clear,
as writers of these Sample Cover Letters
demonstrate.
GoodwillReaders of cover letters are busy
professionals. Thank your reader for taking the
time to read your cover letter. You may also
choose to remind your reader briefly—in no
more than one sentence—why you’re an
excellent candidate for the position. Instead,
you may choose to share with your reader
what you find attractive about the position
or organization.
Future ActionIn your close, you should
help your reader answer a key question:
“What happens next?” Of course, your
primary purpose in writing a cover letter is to
receive an interview request. To accommodate
your reader, provide your contact information.
As a professional courtesy, also invite your
reader to contact you should the reader
have any additional questions of you before
a possible interview is scheduled.
PRO TIP
Maintain an optimal persuasive tone to the very end of your cover letter. Avoid
expressions like “I’m anxious to discuss this position further.” Eager suggests
excitement, and anxious suggests apprehension.
ASK THE ISENBERG EXPERTS!
QUESTION: The closing paragraph of
a cover letter is like a closing paragraph in
an essay, right?
ANSWER: No. Avoid any unnecessary
recap or summary of your story. Your
reader does not require the summary.
Instead, thank your reader, focus on
next steps, and provide your contact
information. For additional examples,
refer to the Sample Cover Letters.
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
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Making the Sell
Inspiring a Reponse
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Your cover letter should conform to full block format. Although other cover letter formats exist,
full block format is the easiest to use, for you never indent any text. Be sure to avoid cover letter
templates. For additional examples of proper format, refer to the Sample Cover Letters.
Formatting Your Cover Letter
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ASK THE ISENBERG EXPERTS!
QUESTION: I’m unsure of my reader’s title (e.g., Ms., Mrs.).
How should I handle that situation?
ANSWER: Avoid using titles unless specifically given in the
posting. In the salutation, use both first and last names if no
title is given. Also, only use specific job titles (e.g., Director
of Human Resources) if they are listed in the posting.
Note: A letterhead is optional and should only
include a writer’s name, email, and phone number.
Use standard monthly format for date
(e.g., September 12, 2020)
Include address if listed in job posting
For the salutation, use name – first and last –
followed by a comma; if no name is given, use
“Hiring Manager”
Add a space between all blocks of text
For the complimentary close, use a common,
suitable phrase (e.g., “Sincerely”), followed by
a comma
Add one line space after the close and insert the
typed name with no signature (as shown here), or
add 3-4 line spaces between the closing and the
typed name and insert an image file of the signature
Note: It is generally not recommended that writers
include contact information below the signature or
make reference to attachments.
Document Design
Item Comment
Margins Use 1.0” standard margins on all sides.
Fonts Select readable serifs (e.g., Times New
Roman, Georgia, Garamond) or sans
serifs (e.g., Calibri, Arial, Tahoma).
Point size Use 11-12 point for main text.
Justification Choose left justification
to create a “flush left,
ragged right” document.
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Isenberg DIgItal assets: tHe Isenberg COVer letter
Putting It All Together
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September 12, 2020
Hiring Manager
Staples, Inc.
500 Staples Drive
Framingham, MA 01702
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to apply for the Marketing Internship posted on the IsenbergWorks platform. I am a junior
marketing major in the Isenberg School of Management at UMass Amherst, where I am also a student in
the Honors College. My recent marketing internship has prepared me to create and publish social media
content and work with content and HR teams, tasks expected of Staples interns. This internship, as well as
my leadership roles at UMass, have prepared me well to succeed in this Staples Marketing Internship.
Last summer, I worked as a marketing intern for OnePIN, Inc., a global provider of mobile services.
Throughout my internship, I utilized iMovie and FinalCutPro to produce 26 product advertisement videos
featured on the company website; I created these videos in English and Turkish to cater to OnePIN’s
global market. Additionally, I completed industry research for senior managers and outlined a social
media plan designed to boost online engagement. Because of my successful performance, I became a
central voice in decision making regarding advertisements and product development. This internship
taught me how to engage confidently with company executives in all departments, and I am prepared to
engage equally well with senior leaders at Staples on similar type of assignments.
As I did in my internship, I have demonstrated strong leadership as a UMass student. In addition to
working two jobs on campus, I presently serve as Risk Manager for the Sigma Sigma Sigma sorority. In
this role, I ensure that all Tri Sigma social media reflects our values and showcases our achievements. I
have become especially skillful at vetting social media posts for content and examining our social media
presence objectively, so our sorority makes a positive, public impression. Values count, and you can
depend on me to help promote Staples’ core values with a positive online presence.
My internship experience and demonstrated leadership would make me an asset to the Staples team. I am
especially eager to intern for a company that values sustainability and the lives of its employees. I look
forward to discussing this position further at your convenience. Please contact me at [email protected]
or at 413-123-4567 with any questions in the meantime. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Michelle Jones
[L1] Putting It All Together (Continued)
Writer forecasts focus
of argument to follow.
Write clear &
concise content
Do not use articles
(i.e., “a,” “an,” “the”)
Do not use periods
at the end of bullets
Use readable serifs (e.g., Times New
Roman, Georgia, Garamond) or sans
serifs (e.g., Calibri, Arial, Tahoma) in
11 or 12 point.
Clear focus
established in
“sell” paragraph.
Writer establishes situation (e.g., student status & major) and
purpose (e.g., interest in position) in opening paragraph.
#1 IN PROGRESS
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Putting It All Together
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Transitions
Proofreading 101
Sample #1
Sample #2
Sample #3
RESOURCES
Transitions link ideas
to improve flow.
Transitions link ideas
to improve flow.
“You attitude”
(i.e., reader benefits)
strengthens argument.
Evidence to support
claim (“strong
leadership”)
stated in topic
sentence of this
“sell” paragraph.
Clear focus shift
introduces new
“sell” paragraph.
Future action is
clear; contact
information is
provided.
Common, appropriate phrase used (e.g., “Sincerely,”
“Yours truly”), followed by a comma.
(a) Add one line space after the close and insert the typed
name with no signature (as shown here);
or
(b) Add 3-4 line spaces between the closing and the
typed name and insert an image file of the signature.
Brief goodwill
included for
persuasive tone
in close.
Use standard
monthly format
for date.
Use “Hiring
Manager” if
no name given.
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Identifying Your Values: An Exploratory Tool
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RESOURCES
To help you communicate your value in your cover letter story, use this tool to help you identify the
connection between your experiences and your values. Allow yourself to brag a bit. Why are you so
proud of a particular experience? What do you think this pride reflects about you?
Maxfield Jones
(413) 123-4567 | Linkedin.com/in/Maxfield-Jones | [email protected]
EDUCATION
University of Massachusetts Amherst
Amherst, MA
Isenberg School of Management
Bachelor of Business Administration in Accounting Candidate, May 20XX
Cumulative GPA 3.73; Dean’s List; Commonwealth Honors College
Anticipated 150 Hour Completion: Will complete 150 hours for CPA com pliancy December 20XX
Bunker Hill Community College
Boston, MA
Associate of Science in Business Administration May 20XX
GPA: 3.75
EXPERIENCE
State Street Corporation
Hadley, MA
Global Operations Processing Analyst Fall 20XX - Present
Process international, federal, and domestic securities transactions (equities, fixed incomes) with 99.6% accuracy
Identify and research problem transactions (e.g., data quality, settlement details, etc.)
Resolve any such conflict via communication with fund managers, team members, and external groups
University of Massachusetts Amherst Amherst, MA
Resident Assistant
Fall 20XX - Present
Develop safe community for residents; earned highest "five-star" safety environment rating for dorm
Enhance residential community by coordinating at least ten social and educational events each semester
Enforce code of student conduct and university policy consistently and objectively
Massachusetts Small Business Development Center (MSBDC)
Springfield, MA
Small Business Consultant Intern June - August 20 XX
Advised small furniture business owner on website strategy; increased site traffic by 27% in two months
Led two interns in orientation meetings with small business owners; increased participants' awareness of services
Developed cash flow strategies and determined loan eligibility while working with clients one-on-one
Citizens Bank
Marlboro , MA
Document Handling Analyst June - August 20XX
Sorted and checked outgoing mail with 99% accuracy rate
Acquired correct customer information to process mail accurately
Batched and shipped loans to appropriate servicer, following established protocol
ACTIVITIES
Beta Alpha Psi
Fall 20XX - Present
Interact with students, faculty, and professionals to foster growth, service, and ethical conduct ideals
Tutor accounting students five hours per week in various courses
Accounting Association
Spring 20XX - Present
Attend numerous speaker forums, programming, and social events to increase knowledge of issues, trends,
and opportunities within the Accounting realm
Isenberg Undergraduate Leadership Council (ULEAD) Spring 20XX
Developed coffee business, Morning Grind, for Isenberg School community with a team of fellow members
Solicited over $2,500 through targeted fundraising efforts
SKILLS
Computer: Microsoft Excel, Word, PowerPoint, Access; Minitab; HTML; CSS; Fluent in JavaScript
Language: Fluent in Portuguese & Spanish; Conversational in German
Your Isenberg resume
captures experiences that
required you to use a range
of skills to accomplish tasks.
Measureable results help
show that these experiences
were successful.
Your cover letter tells
a story that uses these
details to share why
you're proud of these
experiences and what
they reveal about you.
Experience
Measurables
Skills
Braggables
Values
Summer marketing
internship with ABC,
Inc. (mobile service
provider)
Video production Produced 26 product
advertisement videos
presently featured on
company website
I was a central voice in decision
making with respect to
advertisement production
and placement
Taking on new
responsibilities that
challenge me to learn
beyond my current
expertise
Social media
planning
Industry research
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Putting It All Together
Identifying Your Values
Transitions
Proofreading 101
Sample #1
Sample #2
Sample #3
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September 12, 2020
Hiring Manager
Staples, Inc.
500 Staples Drive
Framingham, MA 01702
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to apply for the Marketing Internship posted on the IsenbergWorks platform. I am a junior
marketing major in the Isenberg School of Management at UMass Amherst, where I am also a student in
the Honors College. My recent marketing internship has prepared me to create and publish social media
content and work with content and HR teams, tasks expected of Staples interns. This internship, as well as
my leadership roles at UMass, have prepared me well to succeed in this Staples Marketing Internship.
Last summer, I worked as a marketing intern for OnePIN, Inc., a global provider of mobile services.
Throughout my internship, I utilized iMovie and FinalCutPro to produce 26 product advertisement videos
featured on the company website; I created these videos in English and Turkish to cater to OnePIN’s
global market. Additionally, I completed industry research for senior managers and outlined a social
media plan designed to boost online engagement. Because of my successful performance, I became a
central voice in decision making regarding advertisements and product development. This internship
taught me how to engage confidently with company executives in all departments, and I am prepared to
engage equally well with senior leaders at Staples on similar type of assignments.
As I did in my internship, I have demonstrated strong leadership as a UMass student. In addition to
working two jobs on campus, I presently serve as Risk Manager for the Sigma Sigma Sigma sorority. In
this role, I ensure that all Tri Sigma social media reflects our values and showcases our achievements. I
have become especially skillful at vetting social media posts for content and examining our social media
presence objectively, so our sorority makes a positive, public impression. Values count, and you can
depend on me to help promote Staples’ core values with a positive online presence.
My internship experience and demonstrated leadership would make me an asset to the Staples team. I am
especially eager to intern for a company that values sustainability and the lives of its employees. I look
forward to discussing this position further at your convenience. Please contact me at [email protected]
or at 413-123-4567 with any questions in the meantime. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Michelle Jones
[L1] Putting It All Together (Continued)
Commented [BH20]: Standard monthly format for date.
Commented [BH21]: Use “Hiring Manager” if no name
given.
Commented [BH22]: Times New Roman, 11 point font. Use
readable serifs (e.g., Times New Roman, Georgia,
Garamond) or sans serifs (e.g., Calibri, Arial, Tahoma) in 11
or 12 point.
Commented [BH23]: Writer establishes situation (e.g.,
student status & major) and purpose (e.g., interest in
position) in context.
Commented [BH24]: Writer forecasts focus of argument to
follow.
Commented [BH25]: Clear focus established in “sell”
paragraph.
Commented [BH26]: Transitions link ideas to improve flow.
Commented [BH27]: Transitions link ideas to improve flow.
Commented [BH28]: “You attitude” (i.e., reader benefits)
strengthens argument.
Commented [BH29]: Clear focus shift for new “sell”
paragraph.
Commented [BH30]: Evidence to support claim (“strong
leadership”) stated in topic sentence of this “sell”
paragraph.
Commented [BH31]: Brief goodwill to maintain persuasive
tone in close.
Commented [BH32]: Future action is clear; contact
information provided.
Commented [BH33]: Common, appropriate phrase (e.g.,
“Sincerely,” “Yours truly”), followed by a comma.
Commented [BH34]: For the signature, either:
(a) add one line space after the close and insert the typed
name with no signature (as shown here); or
(b) add 3-4 line spaces between the closing and the typed
name and insert an image file of the signature.
Isenberg DIgItal assets: tHe Isenberg COVer letter
Transitions
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RESOURCES
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Putting It All Together
Identifying Your Values
Transitions
Proofreading 101
Sample #1
Sample #2
Sample #3
Linking Ideas
in addition
moreover
and
and then
besides
again
too
likewise
furthermore
nor
further
next
last
in brief
Emphasizing
surely
certainly
to be sure
undoubtedly
indeed
truly
in fact
without a doubt
Examples
for example
for instance
as proof
specifically
to illustrate
in particular
Summarizing
finally
in conclusion
therefore
as a result
in short
as shown
as stated
in sum
thus
consequently
to sum up
accordingly
Results
as a result
thus
because
since
hence
accordingly
therefore
consequently
Comparing Ideas
in the same way
similarly
likewise
furthermore
have in common
in addition
just as
each
too
the same
equally
like
both
also
Contrasting Ideas
but
still
however
nevertheless
on the contrary
after all
notwithstanding
even though
though
although
on the
other hand
in contrast
otherwise
conversely
yet
while this
may be true
Results
first
(second, etc.)
then
next
finally
Time
meanwhile shortly
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Proofreading 101: Commonly Misused Words
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Words Comment Example
eager/anxious Eager suggests excitement, and anxious suggests
apprehension.
I am eager to learn more about this position.
affect/effect Affect is to change or influence (verb). Effect is an
outcome, result, or condition (noun).
High overhead costs adversely affect profits; the
long-term effect is concerning.
fewer/less Fewer refers to a specific or measurable number.
Less refers to an abstract or unmeasurable amount.
I felt less stress because I made fewer errors.
number/amount Number refers to items counted individually. Amount
refers to quantities measured by degree.
The amount of feedback we received was unexpected,
especially the large number of emails.
principle/principal Principle is a rule or standard; principal is a primary
individual (noun) or primary idea (adjective).
Ms. Williams, a principal of Perkasie Inc., discussed
important business principles.
compliment/
complement
Compliment indicates praise or a gift, and complement
is something that completes or perfects.
My internship experience nicely complements my
academic studies.
peak/pique Peak is a high point (noun) or to reach a high point (verb);
to pique (verb) is to arouse curiosity.
My curiosity was piqued when the market peaked
last week.
insure/ensure To insure is to protect against loss, especially financial loss;
to ensure is to make certain.
We ensured that employees pre-registered for
the training.
accept/except Accept means to agree, and except means to exclude. I accept your proposal, except for two details.
moral/morale Moral refers to a lesson (noun) or virtuous behavior
(adjective), and morale refers to motivation.
Team morale rose after the unexpected win.
rational/rationale Rational means logical or sensible, and rationale refers
to a set of reasons that support a claim.
His rationale for pursuing this option seems rational.
its/it’s Its is a possessive pronoun; it's is a contraction for “it is.” It's amazing how quickly its impact was felt.
your/you’re Your is a possessive adjective; you're is a contraction of
“you are.”
You’re likely to impress them with your
long-term plan.
RESOURCES
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Putting It All Together
Identifying Your Values
Transitions
Proofreading 101
Sample #1
Sample #2
Sample #3
Isenberg DIgItal assets: tHe Isenberg COVer letter
September 12, 2021
Hiring Manager
Staples, Inc.
500 Staples Drive
Framingham, MA 01702
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to apply for the Marketing Internship posted on Handshake. I am a junior marketing major in
the Isenberg School of Management at UMass Amherst, where I am also a student in the Honors College.
My recent marketing internship has prepared me to create and publish social media content and work with
content and HR teams, tasks expected of Staples interns. This internship, as well as my leadership roles at
UMass, have prepared me well to succeed in this Staples Marketing Internship.
Last summer, I worked as a marketing intern for OnePIN, Inc., a global provider of mobile services.
Throughout my internship, I utilized iMovie and FinalCutPro to produce 26 product advertisement videos
featured on the company website; I created these videos in English and Turkish to cater to OnePIN’s
global market. Additionally, I completed industry research for senior managers and outlined a social
media plan designed to boost online engagement. Because of my successful performance, I became a
central voice in decision making regarding advertisements and product development. This internship
taught me how to engage confidently with company executives in all departments, and I am prepared to
engage equally well with senior leaders at Staples on similar type of assignments.
As I did in my internship, I have demonstrated strong leadership as a UMass student. In addition to
working two jobs on campus, I presently serve as Risk Manager for the Sigma Sigma Sigma sorority. In
this role, I ensure that all Tri Sigma social media reflects our values and showcases our achievements. I
have become especially skillful at vetting social media posts for content and examining our social media
presence objectively, so our sorority makes a positive, public impression. Values count, and you can
depend on me to help promote Staples’ core values with a positive online presence.
My internship experience and demonstrated leadership would make me an asset to the Staples team. I am
especially eager to intern for a company that values sustainability and the lives of its employees. I look
forward to discussing this position further at your convenience. Please contact me at mjon[email protected]
or at 413-123-4567 with any questions in the meantime. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Michelle Jones
[L1] Putting It All Together (Continued)
Sample #1: Sell-Sell Strategy
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RESOURCES
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Putting It All Together
Identifying Your Values
Transitions
Proofreading 101
Sample #1
Sample #2
Sample #3
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November 12, 2021
Hiring Manager
Unilever Food Solutions
700 Sylvan Ave
Englewood Cliffs, NJ 07632
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to apply for the Assistant Brand Manager (Req ID: R-21379) position listed on your company’s
online job board. I am a student at the University of Massachusetts Amherst’s Isenberg School of
Management, and I expect to graduate this May with a Bachelor of Business Administration in Marketing. A
UMass Commonwealth Honors College student, I offer Unilever a distinct blend of familiarity with global
markets and insights into the retail food service space that makes me an excellent candidate for this position.
My 2019 internship in Brussels, Belgium with Caramel Publishing, a leading international book publisher,
gave me invaluable experience and insight into B2B marketing in an international setting. My role required me
to partner my creative and analytical skills to help my employer expand into emerging markets. For instance,
one of my projects was to compose a marketing strategy to present to the Brussels Chamber of Commerce.
For this project, I conducted market research and analyzed relevant consumer trends within the mass market
of children’s books. My work helped the company secure new shareholders, and I learned a great deal about
marketing strategies particular to the international B2B consumer space. I am confident that this type of
experience can help me develop and deliver competitive strategy for Unilever’s global food service brands.
More recently, I interned with C&S Wholesale Grocers, which let me showcase my problem-solving skills in
the dynamic food service space. As a Marketing intern for the Fresh Merchandising department, I created
bakery and deli promotional materials designed to increase consumer sales in the company’s Northeast retail
division. As part of this process, I analyzed consumer trend reports and constructed an integrated
communications plan for our food service vendors. My efforts proved so successful that management used
my research to develop a more comprehensive, customer-end food service initiative. Thanks to this
internship, I gained a much firmer grasp of the grocery industry, as well as emerging consumer trends with
respect to food service. This know-how will allow me to help Unilever target new markets and drive growth.
Unilever’s culture of integrity, respect, responsibility, and innovation speaks to me highly, and I welcome a
chance to discuss how I may join this dynamic environment. In the meantime, if you have any questions of
me, please feel free to contact me at (413) 123-4567 or [email protected]. Thank you for your time and
consideration; I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Michelle Jones
[L1] Putting It All Together (Continued)
Sample #2: Sell-S.T.A.R. Strategy
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RESOURCES
Value Proposition Writing & Language Structure Formatting Resources
Putting It All Together
Identifying Your Values
Transitions
Proofreading 101
Sample #1
Sample #2
Sample #3
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January 29, 2021
Pat Johnson
Director, Recruitment & Development
New England Aquarium (NEAQ)
1 Central Wharf
Boston, MA 02110
Dear Pat Johnson,
I first learned about your Volunteer Programming Internship from the NEAQ website. I was particularly
impressed by NEAQ’s commitment to environmental sustainability, and I knew immediately that I
wanted to pursue this opportunity. As an accounting major in the Isenberg School of Management at
the University of Massachusetts Amherst, I actively pursue work that makes a difference, and I am
delighted to express my interest in this position.
As a hardworking and caring individual, I would make a great fit for the culture that defines NEAQ. As a
Co-Director of Operations for Isenberg Citizens First, a community service-based club at UMass, I not
only inspire my peers to serve their community, but also collaborate with nonprofit organizations to
plan events. As a Teaching Assistant for an undergraduate course in business leadership, I have also
developed facilitation skills. Moreover, as a Disability Service Notetaker, I have volunteered my time on
campus to improve my peers’ learning experiences. Each of these roles demonstrates my passion for
education and community service, both of which make me an ideal candidate for your team.
The educational experiences and positive interactions I have had at NEAQ throughout my life have
shown me the sense of community and teamwork that defines your organization, thus attracting me to
this position. My first visit to NEAQ was at the age of one; as I grew up, I learned how critically important
environmental protections and sustainability are for our planet’s future. What can I offer NEAQ? My
passion. As a business student, I have made a commitment to bettering my community through
corporate social responsibility, always seeking opportunities that will help me make the world a better
place. I share NEAQ’s values, and with this internship, I look forward to making a positive impact.
I would sincerely value the opportunity to meet with you and discuss my qualifications in greater detail.
Should you have any questions or require any further information, please feel free to contact me at
[email protected] or (617) 345-6789.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Jayne Isenberg
[RESOURCES]
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Sample #3: Hook-Homework Strategy
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Sample #2
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