It is a written description of what your concentration is and
how it evolved. You can think of it sort of like an artist
statement, but more specific than the ones we’ve been writing in
this class. Your commentary must accompany the artwork
you’ve uploaded to the submission site. Your commentary itself
will not be graded but it does help in the process of evaluating
your artwork. You’ll answer the following two questions:
1. What is the central idea of your concentration? (500
characters minimum)
2. How does the work in your concentration demonstrate the
exploration of your idea? You may refer to specific
images as examples. When referencing specific images,
please indicate the image numbers. (1350 characters
maximum)
Here’s what it looks like when you add your commentary to the
digital submission site:
http://media.collegeboard.com/digitalServices/image/apartsdem
o/screenshots-student/s06L-entering-concentration-statement.gif
CONCENTRATION THEME
Spend a good amount of time developing your Concentration theme. You will be
working on it for a while and will create 12 works of art.
TIPS FOR A SUCCESSFUL CONCENTRATION
1. It is not enough to focus on a subject (trees) or a medium (charcoal). If trees, why
trees? Is it about growth? Negative space in nature? Protective canopies?
Strength and endurance? Branch and leaf structures? The “design” of a forest in
compositional relationships? Look at Mondrian, van Ruisdael, Courbet, van
Gogh and Fairfield Porter.
2. Your exploration should go deeper than merely taking a subject and executing it
in a variety of media or styles. Example: Apples rendered in watercolor, stipple,
crosshatch, cubism, fauvism and surrealism.
3. Ideally you should develop a visual language that fits your idea, a style and
medium and format appropriate to the theme you are investigating.
4. A concentration can be a series of works that are very consistent in theme and
approach OR it may evolve and develop as the visual idea is explored, ending in a
different place than where it began. In either case it is best to start out with a
clear plan of attack; if the idea changes, the change will usually be the natural
result of discoveries made in the process of exploration.
5. Do not choose to work in a medium in which you have absolutely no experience.
This is not the time to try something completely new. The point of the
concentration is to work in depth. This can usually be best achieved in a medium
in which you are already familiar. You are developing concept, not technique.
6. Research artists who have worked in styles similar to your own direction or with
similar subject matter. Do not rely totally on yourself for inspiration. Look at
historical masters, contemporary artists, the world around you and your peers to
cross-pollinate your own ideas.
7. If you choose to work in an area rich in cliché or teenage stereotypes your work
must be very original. It is strongly recommended that you avoid topics such as
blood dripping, skulls, large eyes, hearts, fairies, vampires, emotion through eyes,
your girlfriend/boyfriend, sunsets, rainbows & clouds, or sad clowns.
8. ALL images must adhere to copyright laws. By using original imagery or
drawing from life you will avoid any issues.
9. Themes such as “my feelings and emotions”, “nature” or “flowers” are much too
broad for a concentration. Even the more common concentration themes such as
portraits or still life need a specific focus. Still lifes that tell as story or emphasize
a certain interest in composition or design will be more successful. If the
concentration is “portraits”, you should consider things like format, intent, point
of view, lighting, style and expressiveness.
10. Visit the College Board Website. READ the Concentration Statements and then
look at the artwork. Really LOOK at how the artwork is connected and the artist
developed the idea.